She was interested but afraid of talking to me, mostly because she had just moved in and knew no one in the neighborhood.
Ann had blond, almost white hair, a round face, and small lips, and she was very thin.
As a result, her eyes were always too dark because of shades, while her cheeks were of that unnatural pink color that only low-quality blushes can give.
However, Ann has always been stylish, and she was one of the most popular girls at school because she had the trendiest jeans, T-shirts, and jackets.
So, I can say that she walked a long way from being an insecure teenager who hid behind the “trendy” clothes to become a confident young woman who knows how to be effortlessly attractive.
Ann has lost several pounds recently, so she is very thin now.
The author dwells on how her look and personality changed over time and argues that she has become more serious and determined.
The advantage of this essay is that it describes not only Ann’s physical appearance but the personality as well, which allows drawing the full picture of this person.
His clothing was of rich stuff, but old, and slightly frayed in places.
One of his swollen legs had a pillow under it, and was wrapped in bandages.